demigod

May 8, 2005

Vidai Theriyatha Kelvigal

Filed under: Stories, Tamil — demigod @ 9:12 pm

I wrote this few years back, you may call it as a short story or another version of autograph. However I would like to publish this one here (as no one else want to…) and i would expect your valuable comments to see if i can do such mistakes again.

Kadhaiyil varum kadha-pathirangal anaithum Karpanaiye(?)


Kadantha oru vaarama seriyana mazhai. Sila neram vittalum maru neram adithu peithathu. Rathiri poora mazha penju Oonju thooraloda vidinthathu anraya pozhuthu. Karaikudi-la irukkure akka veetukku anniki poye aaganum. Bus-la polamna.. rendu moonu bus maari poganum, mazhai nerathula bus marrathu romba kastam. Seri neram aanalum parava illa train-la poidalamnu thona, auto pudichi veetule irnthu Tiruvarur junction nokki purapattane.

Junction kulla nuzhanjathum ticket vangitu, appadiye oru news paper-ium vangittu vegama ulla poga, kalai neram week end-ngrathala avvalava kootam illa. Train kilamba ready-a irunrhathu. Vegama ulla eari, jannalora seat thedi ukkaravaum visil satham ketkavum seriya irunthathu. Train-le porathe oru thaniyana sugam than, aal aravam illatha varapugal, marangal ellam nammale vagama kadanthu sellum pothu, namma ninaivugal kuda adikadi niram marum. Athuvum mazhai thoorum bothu Train-la porathunrathu innum alathiyana oru anubavam.

Train purappada, innum silar ooadi vanthu eari kolla, Train vegam eduthathu. Ulla vantha kumbal-il oru naduthara vayathu karar, en munnadi ulla seat-la vanthu ukkanthar. Mooku kannadi aninthu, ennai thadavi padiya thalai vaari riunthar. Naan paper-l moozhlgi irukka, ethire iruntha nabar jannala mooda aayathamanar. Jannal vazhiye thelithu vizhum mazhai thuli enakku romba pidichi irunthathu, so avar jannala moodurathele ennaku udanpadu illai.

“Ean sir jannale sathureenga, venumna unga pakkam ulla jannala mattum sathikkunga” – Naan

“Illa rendium sathidalam, illati thanni ulla vanthudum” – Avar.

“Thanni ulla vantha karanja poyeduvom, vidunga sir” – Naan solli mudikurathukkulle eara eranga parthar.

“Thambi ungalukku Kalyanam Aayeducha? ” – Kannadi.

“Illa, ean?” – naan

“Athan, ippadi pesureenga mazhaiyela karaiyerathu pathi” – Avar.

Enakku onnum puriyala. Ean kalyanam aana, mazhai-la ninaiya koodatha?. Kalayanathu piragu kudumba sumai-nnu niraya kastangal irukkalam, Athukkaga konja neram kuda mazhaia anubavikka kudatha?? School-a padikkum bothu, mazhai-le ninaiya thudikkurom, ean peria aala valarnthutta athellam mari porathu???

Ethu eppadiyo, athukku mela avaridam naan vivatham panna virumbale. Konja neram ponathum avare pesinar, “Thambi konjam paper thareengala, padichuttu tharrane”. Naan yosikka, avar thirumbavum “Thambi neenga chinna vayasu, naan solrathu ellam ungalukku puriyathu, athukkaga naan ungala kurai solla matten, yosikkame paper-a kodunga, naan thiruppi koduthudurane”. Enakku siripputhan vanthathu, vazhikai sumai sila vishyangala pidikkama poga seithalum, sila vishayangalla kuzhanthai mathiri nadakka vekkuthu”. Naan udane paper-i avridam neetinaen.

Train Thanjavoor-i nerungi kondu irunthathu. Thanjavoor thandi Trichy.. appurma Karaikudi. Thanjavoor-i nerunga nerunga, mazhai sutthamaga vittu irunthathu. Thanjavoor enakku pala vagiyela marrakka mudiyatha Oor. Mudhal karanam naan naalu varushama engineering pdichathu/kuppa kottinathu ellam Thanjavoor-lathan. Evvalavo vishayangala nallathu kettathu rendium kathu kodutha Oor. Kalluri natkalai asai pottu konde irukkum bothu Train Thanjavoor junction-l ninrathu. Inga irnthu kilamba eppadium oru 20 nimisham aagum. So appadiye vera ethavathu book vanagalamnu yosichu kila iranga… ethiparatha aachryam.

Amutha – en kuda padicha en college junior. Kuda-ve ava amma, ava annan. Ellarum athe compartment-la eari ulla vara naan ellathium maranthu en seat-kku thallapattane. Enna parthathum avalaukkum athe athirchi. Sathama pesina

“Surya!! Eppadi irukkae? Parthu evvalavu naal aachu?” Kita thatta oru 5 illa 6 varusham irukkum kadaisia naan Amutha-va parthathu.

“Naan nalla irukkane. Nee eppadi irukkae? Enga irukkae?” – naan

“Naan ippa Trichy-la irukkane, angathan poyettu irukkane. Amma, ithu Surya en college senior ” – Ennai arimugam seithu vaithal.

“Eppadi irukkeenga? Amutha-than padichuttu velaikku pogame veetuleye irukka. Enga kuzhanthaiya parthukkave avalukku neram seriya irukku” – Amutha-oda Amma. Appathan kavanichane, Amutha amma kuda irntha kutti payana. Amutha mathiriye azhaga irunthan.

“Kalyanam aayeducha Suriya?” – Amutha.

“Unga veetukarar enna panrar?” – Naan

“Avar Trichy-la work panrar, but nee sollave illaye unakku Kalyanam aayeducha illaya?”

“mm Aayeduchu” – Naan.

Paper-la kavzhlnthu iruntha kannadi udane ennai thirumbi parthathu.

“Etthana kuzhanthainga??” – Amutha

“Innum illa, innum konja naal pogattumnu…” – naan

Athukkula Train move-aga avalum ava annanum avanga amma-va nokki ulla ponargal.

“Seri Surya, thirumba pesrane, amma payana vechukka kastapaduranga” – Amutha.

Avargal ennai vittu nagarnthathum “Ean thambi poi sonneenga?” – Ethire iruntha mooku kannadi.

“Enna poi???” – Naan.

“Kalyanam agalennu en kita eaan poi sonneenga ?”

“Illa, unga kita illa, ava kitathan poi sonnaen” – naan.

Avar aarvama enna parka…

“Nanum Amuthavum ore college-la padichom. Ava vera branch, naan vera branch. Ava enakku oru varusham junior. Amutha-nna college-la niraya perukku pudikkum. Enakkum serthu than. Amutha-kuda naan college daysla romba pesinathu kidayathu. Aana Amuthavoda classmate ava friend Shanmugha Priya en kuda nalla pesuva. Ava-than ennaium Amuthavium serthu adikadi kindal pannuva”

“Amutha thangi irunthathu working womens hostel-la. Naan oovru thadava antha Hostel-i kadakum bothum thirumbi parkkame irunthathe illa. Aana oru thadavai kuda naan Amutha-va Hostel vasal-la parthathu kidayathu. Rendu varushama iruntha intha inam puriyatha oru viruppathai naan ava kita sonnathe illa. Kadaisia sollalamnu mudivu pannainathu, final year mudinju, velaikku sernthu appurama pattamalippu vizha-kaga college pona bothuthan”

“Pattamalippu vizha mudinjathum Amutha kita pesinaen. Ithu naal varaikkum ennalaa en friends/ava friends yarum kidal panni iruntha atha ellam maranthida solli pesinaen. Ithan kadaisi, inime college-kku varathakku unna thavira vera ethum karanam illennu sonnaen, aana ava eppavum pola bathil sollame vegama nadanthu poita.”

“Kidacha mudhal veliyela kavanam thirumbichi. Mumbai-la six months irunthane. Thirumba Amutha-kuda pesa muyarchi seiyyave illa. Shanmugha priya-kku kuda ennaoda Mumbai address theirum so ennikavathu Amutha kita irunthu ethum news varumnu wait panninane. Appuram India vittu niraya veliyela travel pannane, ellathum nadauvule appapa Amutha pathi ninaichukkuvaen. Aana inniki avala nerla parpaennu ninachu parkkave illa”

“Seri athukkaga ean poi sollanum” – Kannadi.

“Ava kuda pesum bothe purinjathu, ava enakku kalyanam aayeduchannu theinjukurathule romba aarvama iruntha. Avalukku kalyanam aagiduchu, so nanaum kalyanam panni santhosama irukanumnu ethipartha, avala emathha virumbale athan kalyanam aagiduchunnu poi sonnaen. Nan sonna udanae ava mugathule oru nimmathi therinjathu, athuve enakku pothum”

Naan pesi mudikka, Train thanjavoor thandi engayo ninrathu. Amuthavoda annan vegama kila erangi ponar, thanni vangittu ulla vanthavar, peru moochoda sonnar. “Amutha paiyan Ice water-than kudippennu adam panran sir, athan vangittu vanthane”

Athe neram Amuthavin amma kural “Seekiram vada, Surya azhuthu vekkiran. Ayyo kannellam sivappa aagiduchu”

Udane naan nimirnthu parkka, ethire irunthavarum ennai nimirnthu parthar.

“Unga peru !!!” – avar.

“Amam – ennaikko ketta kelvikku, innikitahn bathil therinjathu”

Thirumba mazhai peyya aarambichu irunthathu, irunthalum avar jannala thirakka aayathamanar.

34 Comments »

  1. samma periya post na exam mudichitu vandhu padikaren🙂

    Comment by Me — May 11, 2005 @ 1:04 am

  2. Own story aa?

    another version of autograph nu vera solli irukeenga… appo apdi daan, right? Very well expressed. Keep writing more.

    Comment by Chakra Sampath — May 12, 2005 @ 10:51 pm

  3. Thanks Chakra – for visiting me!!

    No commments !!! Vidai theriyatha kelviya irunthuttu pogattum.

    Comment by demigod — May 14, 2005 @ 10:56 pm

  4. Me!!!
    Knadippa, exam nerathule ithu vera periya imse-ya illame irukkattum.

    Come back soon !!!

    Comment by demigod — May 14, 2005 @ 10:57 pm

  5. rhavee – nice one. keep that coming. do this in tamil font if possible. padikka nalla irukkum (originality oda )

    Comment by Dubukku — June 2, 2005 @ 6:48 pm

  6. simple ah alaghu niraintha unvarvu velikaatirukirngga,,,innum eluthalame….

    Comment by vithiyaa — October 10, 2005 @ 6:49 am

  7. dai machi, nan chandra da,, un classmate… machi, unmayile nee amudha -va pathiya???

    Comment by Chandra — February 7, 2006 @ 8:33 am

  8. dai machi, nan chandra da,, un classmate… machi, unmayile nee amudha -va pathiya???

    Comment by Chandra — February 7, 2006 @ 8:36 am

  9. Dey mapla, good writing skill -da keep it up. Elam kala sakarathin (Life Clock) ottam…

    Comment by Mr. Banu — February 9, 2006 @ 2:20 am

  10. nice one..tamil font’la eluthalame..

    Comment by Vidya — June 15, 2006 @ 7:15 pm

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    Comment by mezo — July 2, 2006 @ 2:42 am

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    Comment by nirmal — August 4, 2006 @ 7:51 pm

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